In the grand pattern of things you'll secure an A+ just for effort and hard work. Where exactly you misplaced everybody was on all the particulars. You know, they say, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be much more true here. Having said that, permit me tell you precisely what did do the job. Your article (parts of it) is actually incredibly convincing and this is most likely the reason why I am making an effort to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, while I can certainly notice a jumps in reasoning you come up with, I am definitely not certain of exactly how you appear to connect your details which help to make the actual conclusion. For the moment I shall yield to your position however wish in the near future you actually link the dots better.