Throughout the wonderful pattern of things you'll secure a B+ just for effort. Exactly where you actually confused me was first on your details. You know, it is said, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be much more accurate right here. Having said that, let me say to you what exactly did do the job. The article (parts of it) is definitely rather powerful and this is probably why I am making an effort to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, whilst I can easily see a leaps in reason you make, I am not necessarily certain of how you seem to unite the ideas which in turn help to make your conclusion. For right now I will, no doubt yield to your position but wish in the near future you actually link your dots much better.