In the amazing pattern of things you actually receive an A+ for effort. Where you actually lost me personally was first in all the details. As people say, the devil is in the details... And it could not be much more true here. Having said that, allow me reveal to you what did give good results. The article (parts of it) is quite persuasive and this is possibly why I am making an effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, even though I can certainly see a jumps in logic you come up with, I am not really certain of how you appear to connect the points that produce the final result. For now I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue however hope in the near future you actually connect your dots better.