In the excellent design of things you secure a B- just for effort. Exactly where you lost me was on the details. You know, people say, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be much more true at this point. Having said that, allow me tell you just what did work. The authoring is certainly quite convincing and that is probably the reason why I am taking the effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, while I can easily notice the jumps in reasoning you come up with, I am definitely not convinced of exactly how you appear to unite your ideas which in turn make the actual conclusion. For right now I will subscribe to your issue however trust in the near future you link the facts much better.