In the wonderful design of things you actually secure a B+ just for effort. Where you actually lost everybody ended up being on all the facts. You know, people say, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be more accurate at this point. Having said that, permit me reveal to you what exactly did deliver the results. Your text is actually highly powerful which is possibly the reason why I am making an effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, even though I can notice the leaps in reason you come up with, I am not sure of exactly how you appear to connect your details that produce the actual final result. For now I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue however hope in the near future you link the dots much better.