In this great scheme of things you'll receive an A just for effort. Where exactly you actually misplaced everybody ended up being on the details. You know, people say, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be more accurate right here. Having said that, allow me inform you what exactly did work. Your article (parts of it) is definitely really convincing which is most likely the reason why I am taking the effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, while I can easily see a leaps in logic you come up with, I am not really certain of how you appear to connect your points which produce the conclusion. For now I will, no doubt yield to your position but trust in the future you connect the dots better.